i’m already on the edge of my seat with this first chapter; dr. hoffman reminds me of both patrick bateman and humbert humbert at the same time and the way that you write his meticulousness, obsession and disdain for others (except for rose of course) is really well done. i was so certain that he was going to approach rose at several times you mention him stalking her and it made me so nervous. i wonder if rose knows of him at all! i’m excited to read the next chapter :)
Thank you. I’m glad it made you want to read more of the chapters and kept you on the edge of your seat. I honestly didn’t expect it to remind you of Patrick Bateman or Humbert Humbert 😁
That really means a lot.
At this point in the chapter, she doesn’t know him at all, and he’s still in the stalking phase.
i’m already on the edge of my seat with this first chapter; dr. hoffman reminds me of both patrick bateman and humbert humbert at the same time and the way that you write his meticulousness, obsession and disdain for others (except for rose of course) is really well done. i was so certain that he was going to approach rose at several times you mention him stalking her and it made me so nervous. i wonder if rose knows of him at all! i’m excited to read the next chapter :)
Hi! ☺️
Thank you. I’m glad it made you want to read more of the chapters and kept you on the edge of your seat. I honestly didn’t expect it to remind you of Patrick Bateman or Humbert Humbert 😁
That really means a lot.
At this point in the chapter, she doesn’t know him at all, and he’s still in the stalking phase.
Again, thank you for reading and for the comment.
You create such an intricate and inspired world for the characters. Amazing! 👍
thank you !